子归

这是一个骑在各个墙头上不停咕咕咕的人

对不起本晴明吹真实的炸裂了
官方爸爸赛高!!
奶晴明绝世!!!!!!!

【官小自译】伊甸余烬 序章

*官小自译,纯属爱好,禁止转载、商用

*非常粗糙的翻译,诸位海涵

*TOS宇宙,Shatnerverse(对这个是夏大雷写的),讲的是电影七之后大副去那个小星球接舰长回家

*建议结合 @直立行走的蛋与麦克斯韦 太太翻译的《JTK自传》结语一起看,double刀,收获假期结束的双倍心痛

在历史宣告他的死亡七十五年之后,James T. Kirk的旅程终于结束了。

 

他就要回家了。

 

作为最后一程。

 

在山坡上,一座简单的小石堆掩盖着Kirk的遗骨。一个孤独的身影沉浸在冥想中,静静站在那里,如同一个守卫尽忠守候。

 

Veridian III的黄昏的微风吹拂着他身上优雅的黑色长袍,衣襟上繁复的瓦肯文金银线刺绣描绘着永恒的逻辑准则。这些准则在夕阳气息奄奄的余晖中幽幽闪烁。

 

这守卫凝视着坟茔上那个破损的星际舰队徽章。他的脸上看不出情感的流露,直到他的冥想结束,礼仪已尽。

 

一滴眼泪从他的眼角滑落。

 

而Spock大使没有抗拒它。

 

他的两个半身的缠斗——瓦肯的和人类的——早在几十年前就已结束。

 

三周之前,Spock从不知道这颗小行星的存在。但现在他知道自己再也不能从它的阴影中逃脱。

 

因为历史将会记载,就在这个世界中,James T. Kirk重回人世,只为了再次死去。

 

Spock对友人的第二次悼念比起当初更加,更加痛苦:这其中逻辑何在?

 

在Spock远处,西沉的夕阳把他注视着的小小石堆拖出长长的影子。而在这阴影之中,五个光点闪烁着凝成人形。

 

Spock看着这些传送机的光束化作五名星舰军官。

 

他认识一位——William Riker,进取号的副官。在这行星的其他地方,飞船破碎的残骸在Riker的指挥下被一队星舰工程师们拆解、转移。按照最高指导原则,这里不能留下一丝先进科技的痕迹。等到未来,Veridian III的姐妹星上的原住民登陆此处时,他们必须一无所见。甚至Kirk的遗体也不能留下。

 

剩下的四人和Riker组成一支仪仗队,将同Spock一起回到地球,去举行Kirk的官方葬仪,一场英雄的葬礼。

 

与Kirk对联邦做出的贡献相比,这哀荣在Spock眼中不值一提。但他还能做什么来抚慰心中因Kirk的离去而迸发的苦楚?

 

Spock本已参透了最后的哲理。但因为Kirk,他再度迷失。

 

“你会为我做同样的事。”很久以前,当他在Seleya山顶重生时,Kirk曾这样对他说。

 

而如今,Spock泪流不止,因为他知道自己办不到。尽管这违背所有的逻辑,他现在只想带他回来。

 

至少,他知道,Kirk在最后一刻所面对的并非未知虚无。

 

Spock知道,自鲁拉彭赛之后,他的朋友曾与自己的命运抗争,又与之和解,直到新进取号的发射将它终结。

 

Spock曾从中获得慰藉。他认为这是一个逻辑的结局。

 

在地平线上,恒星Veridian沉没,星星从渐浓的夜色中浮现。这一天总算结束了。

 

仪仗队肃立墓旁。如果一切均按流程,此时,在头顶深空中,一艘星舰应该正在调整轨道,把传送机锁定在这堆石头下面。

 

Kirk的未来不会有Seleya山了。而因此,逻辑让Spock只能从已经逝去的,而不是未来的事物之中寻求安慰。

 

一滴眼泪沿着他的面颊滑下。Spock看着它坠入这个世界的尘土,再被吞没,仿佛从未存在。

 

只余下他的记忆。

 

所以他的记忆回向过去,回到他和他的朋友共同度过的最后一场冒险,最后的时光。那是JamesT. Kirk的路程走向最后——

 

——但尚未终止的时刻……

(对着有很多乱码的电子书翻译的,有几处看不出原文只能自己随便凑一个词的地方,原文头像里有,大家可以去对照着看看)

【另外一定得说清楚,这篇官小和JTK自传并不在同一个官小世界观里面,只是连起来看刀的更深更报社】



【只有大副一个人因为链接而坚信舰长还活着,抱着若有若无的希望/幻想支持自己走过孤独的岁月,但最终却要面对这样一个结局:他确实没有离开,也确实归来,但又立刻死去。这其中怎么会有逻辑呢?】

【官小存档】
Seventy-eight years after history reported him dead, James T. Kirk’s journey had come to an end.He was going home.
For the final time.
On a mountain slope, far above the simple cairn o frocks that was Kirk g grave, a lone figure stood in meditative silence, a sentinel keeping jaithful watch.
His elegant black robes shifted in the twilight breeze of Veridian III. Their intricate embroidery spelled out the timeless principles of logic in metallic threads and Vulcan script.
Those principles shimmered in the dying light of sunset.The sentinel’s gaze remained fixed on the battered Starfleet emblem that rested on the grave. In his expression, there was no betrayal oJ’ emotion, until his meditations were at an end and proper decorum had been observed.
Then a single tear welled up in the corner of his eye.
Ambassador Spock didn’t fight it.That battle between his two halves—Vulcan and human— had been fought and won decades ago.
Three weeks before this day, Spock had never known of this planer’s existence. Yet now he knew he wouM never be free of it.For history now recorded that it was on this world that James T. Kirk had reappeared,only to die again.
Spock’s secondgrieving for his friend was far, far worse than the first had ever been.What logic couM there be in that?
Far below Spock, the setting sun drew long shadows from the modest pile of rocks he watched over. In the air above those shadows, five points of light sparkled to life.Spock looked on as the transporter beams resolved into five Starfleet ofiScers.One he knew—William Riker, late of the Starship Enterprise. Elsewhere on this planet, lhat vessel’s shattered wreckage was being dismantled and removed by a team of Starfleet engineers under Riker~ command. In accordance with the Prime Directire, no trace of advanced technology could remain behind. Should the future inhabitants of Veridian III~ sister planet land here, they would discover nothing. Not even Kirk g body.
The four others with Riker formed the honor guard that would travel with Spock back to Earth, for Kirk~ oJficial interment. A hero funeral.
For all that Kirk had meant to the Federation, that honor seemed trivial to Spoek. Yet what more could be done to assuage the sorrow of those Kirk had touched when his spirit had fled?
Spock had passed through that last veil himself But because of Kirk, he had returned.
“You wouM do the same forme,” Kirk had told him, long ago on the summit of Mount Seleya, when Spock had been reborn.Now the tear grew in Spock’s eye because he knew he could not. Though against all logic, he desired nothing else.At least, he knew, Kirk had not faced whatever lay beyond his moment of death unaware of its coming.
Spock knew his friend had confronted his fate and reconciled himself to it, in that timebetween Kirk g return Jkom Khitomer and the launching of the new Enterprise which had sealed his fate.Spock took comfort from that knowledge. He found it to be most logical.
On the horizon, Veridian set and the stars shone forth from the gathering dark. The day at last was done.The honor guard waited at attention by the grave. If all proceeded according to schedule, at this moment, far overhead, a starship wouM be shifting orbits, preparing to lock her transporter on the remains beneath the stones.
There couM be no Mount Seleya in Kirk’s future. Logic, therefore, directed Spock to seek solace not in what might lie ahead, but in what had gone before.
The tear slipped down his cheek. Spock watched it fall to the dust of this world. Swallowed as if it had never existed.
Except in his memories.So to his memories now he turned, to the.final adventure and the revelations of those last days he had spent with his friend.When the journey of James 7: Kirk had been ending
——but was not yet over…

TNG618,Picard与Enterprise D的舰桥

这一段应该是皮皮在整个TNG里最触动我的地方之一了。

我是补完整个TOS再来补TNG的,而刚开始看的时候,最不适应的地方之一就是那种……人与星舰的疏离感吧。在NCC–1701上,老舰长最关心的就是他的船和船员们,Scotty为了他的进取号跟克林贡人大打出手,Spock也曾说“我对这艘船负有责任”,就连最不喜欢太空的老骨头,多年以后在进取号D上也对Data说“好好对她,她就会带你回家”【treat her like a lady, and she will always take you home】
【所以TNG里Scotty对电脑说“N-C-C-1-7-0-1,no bloody A or B or C or D”的时候我是真的泪崩了,眼圈红了半个下午】
现在想想,至少在国内,只有原初进取号有“银女士”的爱称。我不知道这是不是因为AOS的影响,但我愿意相信这是因为这艘船的船员们对这个“she”的感情是如此深厚,以至于“她”真的有了某种鲜活的生命。
而TNG里这样的portrayal就没有那么多,给人的感觉也不像TOS里那么的强烈。这大约是表演风格转换,剧本设计变革等等原因导致的,皮皮这个角色也是那种所谓“内向型领导”,情感表达本就不会那么明显,但这种疏离感就是让人觉得……怅然若失。
直到我看到这一段。
这里,企业号D因为要接受对人体有害的重子扫描,疏散了全体成员,皮皮因为收拾东西什么的最后一个离开。而当他走出ready room,来到难得静谧无人的舰桥上时,他停了一会,接着绕了一个圈,看着,欣赏着这方寸天地,最后停下来,微笑着抚摸控制面板一角。
皮卡德一向冷静自持,从某种程度来讲可以说有些不苟言笑。他不是像柯克一样用热情团结集体的舰长,而是那种用figure来引领他的船员的类型。这要求他保持住坚定而不动声色的面孔,也要他限制着感情的流露。可当他面对着难得空闲下来的舰桥之时,他不再受舰长这个角色的限制了,而他对星舰那份真挚的情感,也就那么自然而然流露而出。
这是一个船长对他的船的告白。
斯图尔特爷爷真的是一个好演员。这一段没有台词,除了走路也没有什么动作,但皮卡德对于舰桥,对于“他的”企业号的爱意与敬重就通过这20来秒,呈现在所有人面前。
而在电影8炸飞船之前皮卡德站在舰桥上环视的场景也是如此,但因为情况危险负担沉重心态焦灼,那一段就不像这里,如此平和,如此沉静,如此真挚,如此动人,如此像爱真正的样子。
【顺便,这一集的编剧也执笔了著名的the inner light。这位大大请收下我的膝盖。】
【再顺便,ST40周年纪念混剪the inner light里下一代的第一个镜头也就是这一段皮皮环视舰桥了,配上音乐真的touching到炸】


我们就来看看一些关于The Inner Light的有趣故事

这集的标题来自于披头士

The Inner Light是披头士乐队的一首歌,歌词里表达了一种“不用亲自前往就可以经历很多事情的能力”。这正是这一集星际迷航剧集的主题之一,皮卡德身在进取号D上,却在Kataan星球经历了普通人一辈子的光阴。

剧本灵感来自富士影像的广告飞艇

这集的编剧摩根·杰德尔(Morgan Gendel)回忆当年他创作这集的心路历程时说道,自己最早是一名自由写手,和下一代的编剧之一 Joe Menosky约好谈谈为《下一代》创作剧集的事情。但是在约定时间快来时,他发现自己依然没有任何新鲜或者原创故事的好想法。那时候他最小的女儿才两岁,有一天他在女儿房间从窗口望出去的时候,看到了富士影像用来宣传的广告飞艇,他觉得看上去非常有未来感。于是他有了这么个想法,假设进取号碰上了这样一个古老又未来的宣传设备,可以直接在你脑海中播放影像,让你觉得经历了这些,会如何?这就有了The Inner Light的雏形。

最早的故事里,皮卡德、莱克和罗少尉一起经历了这个事故,编剧还曾设想过这三个人的三角恋
The Inner Light并不是编剧头脑一热立刻就写好的,摩根说,自己前前后后和主创们开了五次会,每次这个想法就会更好一点。在他和主创之一迈克尔·皮勒不断讨论下,等到第一稿正式完成的时候,他们就已经意识到这将会是很特别的一集。在最早的故事里,受到外星探测器影响的不仅仅是皮卡德舰长,还有莱克大副,以及罗少尉,他们一起经历了那样的生活,甚至还有过三角恋。但主创们最终将这个故事的主角定为了皮卡德舰长一个人。【否则就太狗血了吧...

这集里的皮卡德舰长设定中带有柯克的影子

编剧摩根·杰德尔表示,自己是原初的超级大粉丝,所以他为《下一代》创作的两个剧本(The Inner Light和Starship Mine)都是舰长单人主角的剧集,因为他将柯克的一些特质带给了他写的皮卡德舰长。在The Inner Light中他是一位情人;在Starship Mine中,他是一位战士。他说,帕特里克爵士的表演无可挑剔,但是他一直觉得皮卡德看上去像是那种坐在高高王座上的样子,这两集可以表现出他的更多面。

帕特里克·史图华特的儿子丹尼尔在这集中扮演了他的儿子

皮卡德舰长的扮演者帕特里克·史图华特在现实生活中的儿子丹尼尔·史图华特在这一集里扮演了卡明的儿子。这也是父子在星际迷航里的首次合作。
(右边这位就是亲生儿子)

The Inner Light的续集?

摩根·杰德尔说,自己曾向主创们提出过The Inner Light的续集想法。进取号碰到了和外星探测器同样形状的飞船,而在飞船上的是处在停滞状态的一些Kataan人,这些人是当年星球毁灭时存活下来的一些科学家们,其中,就包括了皮卡德舰长/卡明在Kataan星上的妻子Eline。
这个故事最终没有能够成为剧本,但摩根还是将它写了出来,并在2012年,The Inner Light 20周年的时候将其以同人漫画的方式发表在了网上,这个故事他取名叫做The Outer Light(在此阅读部分:http://treksinscifi.com/podcast_notes/?p=2292)。但似乎粉丝反响一般。

TNG 508,Spock对于皮卡德的评价。
看这集对于我这个TOS的粉简直就是大刀穿心
时间点是ncc1701d时期,老舰长在进取号b失踪已经过了好几十年,Spock已经是星际联邦大使
这时的Spock突然消失,偷渡到罗慕兰母星为罗慕兰瓦肯统一的地下运动提供支持。
而此时罗慕兰已与瓦肯分离数个世纪,两个文明已经产生了质的不同;罗慕兰也正与星际联邦交恶,星舰发现Spock的行踪之后甚至做好了他叛变的准备。
按照皮卡德的说法,这种行为是“冒进鲁莽的( cowboy-like)”,“如果不是因为我对您有所了解,我会说您的情感已经压过了逻辑的指引”
而老大副的回答是,他的外交手段一直如此,甚至早于皮卡德出生。他说“你的头脑已被封闭了,而这种封闭让罗慕兰与瓦肯数百年来嫌隙四生,让众人看不到统一的可能与价值。”,他预见并力图促进这场统一,哪怕为此身败名裂。
现在的Spock已经不是tos剧集里他了,不再为自己的身份摇摆不定,不再视情感与逻辑为水火不容。他达到了自己的平衡,并且致力于把这份平衡带给两个摇摇欲坠于两个极端的世界。

Spock在James T Kirk离开这个时空数十年后践行着当年他说的话:为什么非要在两个世界中间挣扎?为何不成为它们双方最好的那部分?

Spock对皮卡德说you are as stubborn as another enterprise. captain i once knew。他自己又何尝不是如此呢?

秋天最萧瑟而美好的样子

夏大雷在ST第一部上映前的访谈

P1夏大雷上场。他朝女观众们抛媚眼的那一下上我瞬间懂得了贱长泡遍全宇宙的资本
P2P3不知道是不是特意的,拍夏大雷的远镜头和近镜头巨像TOS里拍舰长椅的机位。远看的时候真的超级有感觉【但拉近了就……果然还是过了十年啊……】
P4是大雷教主持人念那个最有名的t'hy'la……之前查说大概念“太嗨啦”的时候脑补的是清辅音t+小舌音h+英语la的那种……大雷这个【不知道是不是官方的】版本直接把我吓了一跳……
感觉这个词只发一个音系列……
P5一只超级美貌的年轻夏大雷
P6舰长峰会

中间那个主持人一直在说一个电视剧能够让观众念念不忘十年真的是特别特别特别了……四十多年后再看,简直说不出的……感觉

当我在点小红心、小蓝手以及留评论时,我在想什么

真的是真实写照了😂
赞美我混过的所有圈子里美好的太太们!
抱抱!

齐泱:

只有小红心:
第一种情况:已阅。
第二种情况:马。
第三种情况:哇!这个好棒!但不想让别人看到!没人看到我就能独占了!我要像头龙一样把这个宝贝藏得谁都看不见!!!它是我的!

只有小蓝手:
扩。

既有小红心又有小蓝手:
哇啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊为什么有这么好的东西!这么好的东西怎么才这么一点点热度!不行!我恨不得一个人给它点两百个热度啊啊啊啊!作者太太您感受到我炽烈的爱了吗!我爱你啊!请继续加油啊!

评论:
别多想了,作者太太,这就是在向您求婚。

ALTERNATE SCENE B

SPOCK PRIME
Then I ask that you do yourself a
favor… put away logic, and do what
feels right. The world you’ve inherited
lives in the shadow of incalculable
devastation… but there’s no reason you
must face it alone.

And from around his neck, he removes the PENDANT that
until now, we’ve only caught glimpses of. Places it on
the table beside his younger self. The feeling in his
eyes is profound…

SPOCK PRIME (CONT’D)
This was a gift to me. Representing…
a dream. One we were unable to fulfill.
(softly)
The way you can now.

And moves to the door. Stops. Offers the VULCAN SALUTE:

SPOCK PRIME (CONT’D)
As my customary farewell would appear
oddly self serving, I will simply say…
good luck.

Their eyes hold. Spock turns, disappearing into the
corridor. Young Spock stares at the empty doorway a
beat, his mind a jumble of thoughts. Looks to the
pendant… and realizes it’s a HOLO-EMITTER. After
considering a beat, he hits an activation button and a
MOVING HOLOGRAPHIC MESSAGE materializes before him:

CAPTAIN JAMES T. KIRK. WILLIAM SHATNER. As always,
brash, wry, confident — and SINGING:

KIRK/ SHATNER
Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to
you…
(stops, grins)
I know I know, it’s illogical to
celebrate something you had nothing to do
with, but I haven’t had the chance to
congratulate you on your appointment to
the ambassadorship so I thought I’d seize
the occasion… Bravo, Spock — they tell
me your first mission may take you away
for awhile, so I’ll be the first to wish
you luck… and to say…
(beat, emotional)
I miss you, old friend.

… and we’re PUSHING IN on Young Spock, taking in the
image of Kirk’s future self, the message, but above all —
the clear, unquestionable friendship these two men had…

INT. CORRIDOR – CONTINUOUS

As Spock Prime walks off down the corridor, he passes
right by a man conferring with a nurse — the man pauses,
turns… it’s SAREK. Suddenly overcome by a feeling that
the stranger who’s just passed him is… oddly familiar.

KIRK/SHATNER (V.O.)
I suppose I’d always imagined us…
outgrowing Starfleet together. Watching
life swing us into our Emeritus years…

INT. STARBASE ONE – HANGAR – ETERNAL NIGHT

MUSIC BUILDING — glass walls reveal THE ENTERPRISE at
dock, UTILITY CRAFTS floating around it, repairing.
Standing at attention in rows, THE ENTERPRISE CREW —
over four hundred of them wearing DRESS UNIFORMS — TRACK
DOWN the faces, all proud:

KIRK/SHATNER (V.O.)
I look around at the new cadets now and
can’t help thinking… has it really been
so long? Wasn’t it only yesterday we
stepped onto the Enterprise as boys?
That I had to prove to the crew I
deserved command… and their respect?

And we STOP ON YOUNG KIRK. Composed, focused, proud. A
man. And to every fan’s delight, finally wearing his
YELLOW SHIRT. The FEDERATION COMMANDANT stands at a
podium:

COMMANDANT
This assembly calls Captain James
Tiberius Kirk…

Kirk breaks from formation, pivots, marches down the
hangar — past UHURA… SULU… CHEKOV… SCOTTY. All
Beaming. Notably absent, is Spock. Kirk ascends the
stairs, snaps to attention:

COMMANDANT (CONT’D)
Your inspirational valor and supreme
dedication to your comrades are in
keeping with the highest traditions of
service and reflect utmost credit to
yourself, your crew, and the Federation.
By Starfleet Order 28455, you are hereby
directed to report to Commanding Officer,
USS Enterprise, for duty as his relief.

Kirk turns. Walks to… PIKE. In a wheelchair now,
wearing an ADMIRAL’S UNIFORM. Overnight, his hair’s
turned totally grey — but despite his trauma, his
pride’s overwhelming. They SALUTE each other:

KIRK
I relieve you, Sir.

PIKE
… I am relieved.

He opens a BOX in his lap — glorious in repose, a MEDAL:

PIKE (CONT’D)
And as Fleet Admiral, for your… unique
solution to the Kobayashi Maru, it’s my
honor to award you with a commendation
for original thinking.

Pike containing a smirk, pins the medal to Kirk’s
chest…

PIKE (CONT’D)
(a touch choked)
Congratulations, Captain.

KIRK
Thank you, Sir.

Kirk turns to the crowd. Eyes shining. WILD APPLAUSE.
OUR MUSIC SOARS. Bones leans in to Sulu, rolling his
eyes:

BONES
… Same ship, different day.

As Kirk rejoins his crew for hugs and congratulations, we
go to the BACK of the hangar… SPOCK PRIME. Watching.
Moved beyond words. He turns and leaves them to it… as
he goes…

KIRK/SHATNER (V.O.)
I know what you’d say — ‘It’s their turn
now, Jim…’ And of course you’re
right… but it got me thinking:

INT. STARFLEET HOSPITAL – EARTH – DAY

Our montage comes full circle as we END on Kirk’s
transmission:

KIRK/SHATNER
Who’s to say we can’t go one more round?
By the last tally, only twenty five
percent of the galaxy’s been chartered…
I’d call that negligent. Criminal even —
an invitation. You once said being a
starship captain was my first, best
destiny… if that’s true, then yours is
to be by my side. If there’s any true
logic to the universe… we’ll end up on
that bridge again someday.

Stops, grins. Because this is the part he needs to say
most…

KIRK/SHATNER
Admit it, Spock. For people like us, the
journey itself… is home.

Young Spock’s face. Lost in feelings that flood through
him.